100 WC – The next act.

As the crowd’s eyes stared at us I took a deep breath ready to introduce the act me and my sister were going to do. I looked down at her and she smiled. I opened my mouth to speak when it suddenly whent dark.

Everyone was silent for a few seconds until a ear piercing scream rippled in the air. I could tell it was in the crowd but it felt right in my ear. The lights flashed back and I looked down at my sister. She was fine but someone in the crowd was lying down surrounded by a puddle of red.

2 thoughts on “100 WC – The next act.

  1. Hi Brynn,
    I really like this piece because i can get a very clear description of what is happening. I really like the last sentence because it automatically makes the reader infer that the person lying on the ground is dead.
    Good Job!! 🙂 🙂
    Sofia

    • Hello Sofia,
      Thank you for the comment I appreciate hearing about the things that you liked about my story, although I also appreciate hearing critisim as well.
      Thanks,
      -Brynn

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