Sunshine, Ice, Frightened, Purple, Flew 100 WC #1 – Term 3

To think I was so frightened before. While we flew over to America, my head was pounding. Actually arriving to my new school gave me so much happiness, it was like watching freezing cold ice melt in the sunshine and the realisation that its summer. It was like watching a sunset with all the colours in the rainbow, like red and pink and purple. Everyone was so nice to me. It was like discovering to fly, and flying over the most beautiful places in the world. I feel at home at my new school, and to think I was scared.

My goal this week was to relate to myself a bit. Even though I may of exaggerated, I related to how I was nervous about starting a new school, but it turned out fine. I did this by talking about how the character felt this.

One thought on “Sunshine, Ice, Frightened, Purple, Flew 100 WC #1 – Term 3

  1. I think you achieved your goal. I didn’t know what the first sentence meant, I think you might have needed a comma but apart from that it was very good.

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